The small stones fell of the mountain as if they were afraid of something up there. Steven and Mike looked miniscule compared to the massive mountain. “I guess we’re here” Steven said. Mike gave a small grin as if they accomplished something fairly simple. Their journey for the sword took longer than they thought.“We have to find the opening in the mountain.” Mike excalimed with a serious tone.
“What are we waiting for, let’s get going.” This set their journey off. In the first hour they went a third around the mountain and successfully found the entrance to the maze. They started climbing. Most of the rocks weren't stable and when stepped on crumbled. This mountain was created by the eruption of the volcano on the top. The lava spilled and a layer of fragile pumice covered the ground. After a while of walking they needed a break. They found a rather flat space and sat down. Their shirts got blackened because of the dust that was created by the volcano. Steve looked at mike’s short black hair and took in his facial features. Why was the main word in his mind. Why him? Why is he doing this? Why was he here? All these emotions burst out and he just had to ask. “Why are you doing this?”
“I don’t know really, but I have had these weird dreams lately. They told me that i should find you and.. And here we are. It started not too long ago actually, a week or so before we met up”
“I also had these dreams, they come up once in a while."
"Do they tell you anything?"
"No, they're relly just images but they can't get out of my head."
A rumble from the inside of the mountain stopped their conversation. They thought that something
mightve been happening so they left as soon as possible. They put the half eaten sandwiches in their bags and set off. They walked for what felt like a mile before they reached the mouth of this cave.
The smell of rotting bodies which reached their noses instantly was so powerful, they needed to cover their noses. They ripped some of the fabric off of their shirt sleeves and wrapped it around their heads and noses. This benefited them a lot as something upcoming was about to get dangerous. A massive shreik like an eagle's but almost being like a lions rawr at the same time. The two guys knew they were in trouble. They took out their knives and got into a ready stance to protect themselves from any upcoming attacks. A massive creature with the body of a lion and a head of an eagle stood up to them and was making the distance between them smaller by the second. To their surprise the wings that they had were not as strong as they thought they would be.With a quick strike, Mike cut the creatures leg really close to its wingsIt was limping. "Let's go!" screamed Mike but he said it too soon. With it's powerful legs it hit the wall and the stalactites fell off the ceilings. Mike was unfortunately placed under all of them. Steve shouted to watch out. Mike jumped but it was too late and one of them impaled his shin. With a great scream of pain, mike fell to,the ground. Steve threw the knife at the beast to buy himself some time. He went over to mike and said "i need to finish this off myself since you can't."
"Do it for me" mike said. As Steve started to go to mike said "if i don't make it tell my family i will miss them.". With a heart pumped with fire from Mike he went into the battle.
He ran at it with an attempt to intimidate it but he had no chance to scare such a beast. He got another cut on the legs but on the other one. This was his chance. He ran off the wall at it but with a powerful strike from the beak it threw him a couple meteres away. It was weakened and if steve didnt take this opportunity they would get a certain death. He ran at it with a scream and with a final blowto the neck he killed the beast. The sword was theirs and a chance to kill Olum arose...
Thursday, March 24, 2016
Wednesday, March 23, 2016
Story v2.0
Genre: Adventure/ fantasy
Main character with full character traitsCharacter (protagonist):
Name: Steven
Characteristics:he is a developing character intelligent, popular, when near evil he gets telekinetic powers, he enjoys being around people, he takes care of himself and people around him well, he has his powers because his Dad was a protector of this planet, he has a great sense of humour. He is a developing character because he becomes more confident, more expierienced and learns about his powers.
Motivation: He wants to find and rescue his father. Also to protect the world.
story line (plot 101)
Steve is a normal 15 year old, well built, black short hair and blue eyes. His dad died.One day in his sleep he sees terrifying images in his sleep and when he wakes up he feels different. All of a sudden near death expieriences happen. He goes out with his friends to a chinese restaurant. After his meal he opens his fortune cookie and in it it sais that his life is in great danger and he has to meet on (insert lightly sinister alley Name here)... This is the distruption. Later on it turns out he has powers that he didn't know he had. This man tells him this on that alley. Next an organisation called BZR tries to capture and kill him because he has his powers. This organisation is from a different dimention which they took over. They took over that dimention and now they came for us. He has to travel with this man to that dimension to infiltrate and comfront the leader of the 'organisation' in that dimension. The leaders name is Olum.The way to destroy this organisation is to kill the leader with the blade of life. They have to go find this weapon and then kill the leader. The weapon is guarded by a griffon, which is normally good, but is controlled by the organisation by a secret potion. They used this potion to control the organisation on earth. the sword is hidden in the center of a maze hidden in a mountain. He kills the griffon and gets the sword. Rise of action. Next he has to sneak around in the castle and reach the throne room. He kills the leader and the land is brought to peace, however it turns out his father was already dead long ago. Climax. Steve becomes the protector of this planet as well as a normal school boy. His goal is to Stop people as Olum. resolution, change of ordinary world
moment in your narrative
what are the conflicts?
which other characters?
how does your character grow, or confirm a characteristic?
The conflicts In my moment are where Steven and Mike they go through a maze. man vs man, man vs environment
In this maze he has to kill a griffon to get the sword. This griffon is controlled by bzr to protect the sword. Man vs man
In this moment the characters are Steven mike.
Steven devolps his confidence when he trusts himself and attacks the griffon. He also develops his power by killing the griffon with it and collecting the sword. He proves that he can take care of people by saving mike from a falling stone by pushing him away.
Model text to be approved by me if not one of our texts this year
example piece(s) posted
description, the way the author writes it. My description post
Dialogue, the way the author writes it. My dailogue post
Main character with full character traitsCharacter (protagonist):
Name: Steven
Characteristics:he is a developing character intelligent, popular, when near evil he gets telekinetic powers, he enjoys being around people, he takes care of himself and people around him well, he has his powers because his Dad was a protector of this planet, he has a great sense of humour. He is a developing character because he becomes more confident, more expierienced and learns about his powers.
Motivation: He wants to find and rescue his father. Also to protect the world.
story line (plot 101)
Steve is a normal 15 year old, well built, black short hair and blue eyes. His dad died.One day in his sleep he sees terrifying images in his sleep and when he wakes up he feels different. All of a sudden near death expieriences happen. He goes out with his friends to a chinese restaurant. After his meal he opens his fortune cookie and in it it sais that his life is in great danger and he has to meet on (insert lightly sinister alley Name here)... This is the distruption. Later on it turns out he has powers that he didn't know he had. This man tells him this on that alley. Next an organisation called BZR tries to capture and kill him because he has his powers. This organisation is from a different dimention which they took over. They took over that dimention and now they came for us. He has to travel with this man to that dimension to infiltrate and comfront the leader of the 'organisation' in that dimension. The leaders name is Olum.The way to destroy this organisation is to kill the leader with the blade of life. They have to go find this weapon and then kill the leader. The weapon is guarded by a griffon, which is normally good, but is controlled by the organisation by a secret potion. They used this potion to control the organisation on earth. the sword is hidden in the center of a maze hidden in a mountain. He kills the griffon and gets the sword. Rise of action. Next he has to sneak around in the castle and reach the throne room. He kills the leader and the land is brought to peace, however it turns out his father was already dead long ago. Climax. Steve becomes the protector of this planet as well as a normal school boy. His goal is to Stop people as Olum. resolution, change of ordinary world
moment in your narrative
what are the conflicts?
which other characters?
how does your character grow, or confirm a characteristic?
The conflicts In my moment are where Steven and Mike they go through a maze. man vs man, man vs environment
In this maze he has to kill a griffon to get the sword. This griffon is controlled by bzr to protect the sword. Man vs man
In this moment the characters are Steven mike.
Steven devolps his confidence when he trusts himself and attacks the griffon. He also develops his power by killing the griffon with it and collecting the sword. He proves that he can take care of people by saving mike from a falling stone by pushing him away.
Model text to be approved by me if not one of our texts this year
example piece(s) posted
description, the way the author writes it. My description post
Dialogue, the way the author writes it. My dailogue post
Tuesday, March 22, 2016
Moment in my narrative
The conflicts In my moment are where Steven and Mike they go through a maze. man vs man, man vs environment
In this maze he has to kill a griffon to get the sword. This griffon is controlled by bzr to protect the sword. Man vs man
In this moment the characters are Steven mike.
Steven devolps his confidence when he trusts himself and attacks the griffon. He also develops his power by killing the griffon with it and collecting the sword. He proves that he can take care of people by saving mike from a falling stone by pushing him away.
In this maze he has to kill a griffon to get the sword. This griffon is controlled by bzr to protect the sword. Man vs man
In this moment the characters are Steven mike.
Steven devolps his confidence when he trusts himself and attacks the griffon. He also develops his power by killing the griffon with it and collecting the sword. He proves that he can take care of people by saving mike from a falling stone by pushing him away.
Monday, March 21, 2016
Thursday, March 10, 2016
Characters
Protagonist good guy, Archetype 2 or 3 character traits, Antagonist bad guy, catalyst sets things off, foil allows the protagonist to be the protagonist by making the decisions That he makes, flat character, round character lots of characteristics, growing character character that develops, caricature 1 character trait
Tuesday, March 8, 2016
My Story
Story:
Genre: fantasy
Story: Steve is a normal 15 year old, well built, black short hair and blue eyes. His dad died.One day in his sleep he sees terrifying images in his sleep and when he wakes up he feels different. All of a sudden near death expieriences happen. He goes out with his friends to a chinese restaurant. After his meal he opens his fortune cookie and in it it sais that his life is in great danger and he has to meet on (insert lightly sinister alley Name here)... Later on it turns out he has powers that he didn't know he had. This man tells him this on that alley. Next an organisation called BZR tries to capture and kill him because he has his powers. This organisation is from a different dimention which they took over. They took over that dimention and now they came for us. He has to travel with this man to that dimension to infiltrate and comfront the leader of the 'organisation' in that dimension. The leaders name is Olum.The way to destroy this organisation is to kill the leader with the blade of life. They have to go find this weapon and then kill the leader. The weapon is guarded by a griffon, which is normally good, but is controlled by the organisation by a secret potion. They used this potion to control the organisation on earth. the sword is hidden in the center of a maze hidden in a mountain. He kills the griffon and gets the sword. Next he has to sneak around in the castle and reach the throne room. He kills the leader and the land is brought to peace, however it turns out his father was already dead long ago. Steve becomes the protector of this planet as well as a normal school boy. His goal is to Stop people as Olum
Setting: Busy center of london, the castle of BZR, the maze in the mountain, stone hendge ( the place where the transition between dimentions), the dimention is mostly gray and grim because of the destruction of BZR
Conflicts: man vs man, Man vs Environment
Character (protagonist):
Name: Steven
Characteristics:he is a developing character intelligent, popular, when near evil he gets telekinetic powers, he enjoys being around people, he takes care of himself and people around him well, he has his powers because his Dad was a protector of this planet, he has a great sense of humour. He is a developing character because he becomes more confident, more expierienced and learns about his powers.
Motivation: He wants to find and rescue his father. Also to protect the world.
Character 2 (catalyst ):
Name: Mike
Characteristics: fearless, curious, heroic, smart, overconfident, doesnt like to think outside the box.
He is a catalyst because he is the one to give steven the note that he is in danger. This sets the story off.
Character (antagonist):
Name: Olum
Characteristics: intelligent, powerful, creative, sometimes careless, vengeful,
Motivation: he is greedy for power and wants to control every world there is.
Genre: fantasy
Story: Steve is a normal 15 year old, well built, black short hair and blue eyes. His dad died.One day in his sleep he sees terrifying images in his sleep and when he wakes up he feels different. All of a sudden near death expieriences happen. He goes out with his friends to a chinese restaurant. After his meal he opens his fortune cookie and in it it sais that his life is in great danger and he has to meet on (insert lightly sinister alley Name here)... Later on it turns out he has powers that he didn't know he had. This man tells him this on that alley. Next an organisation called BZR tries to capture and kill him because he has his powers. This organisation is from a different dimention which they took over. They took over that dimention and now they came for us. He has to travel with this man to that dimension to infiltrate and comfront the leader of the 'organisation' in that dimension. The leaders name is Olum.The way to destroy this organisation is to kill the leader with the blade of life. They have to go find this weapon and then kill the leader. The weapon is guarded by a griffon, which is normally good, but is controlled by the organisation by a secret potion. They used this potion to control the organisation on earth. the sword is hidden in the center of a maze hidden in a mountain. He kills the griffon and gets the sword. Next he has to sneak around in the castle and reach the throne room. He kills the leader and the land is brought to peace, however it turns out his father was already dead long ago. Steve becomes the protector of this planet as well as a normal school boy. His goal is to Stop people as Olum
Setting: Busy center of london, the castle of BZR, the maze in the mountain, stone hendge ( the place where the transition between dimentions), the dimention is mostly gray and grim because of the destruction of BZR
Conflicts: man vs man, Man vs Environment
Character (protagonist):
Name: Steven
Characteristics:he is a developing character intelligent, popular, when near evil he gets telekinetic powers, he enjoys being around people, he takes care of himself and people around him well, he has his powers because his Dad was a protector of this planet, he has a great sense of humour. He is a developing character because he becomes more confident, more expierienced and learns about his powers.
Motivation: He wants to find and rescue his father. Also to protect the world.
Character 2 (catalyst ):
Name: Mike
Characteristics: fearless, curious, heroic, smart, overconfident, doesnt like to think outside the box.
He is a catalyst because he is the one to give steven the note that he is in danger. This sets the story off.
Character (antagonist):
Name: Olum
Characteristics: intelligent, powerful, creative, sometimes careless, vengeful,
Motivation: he is greedy for power and wants to control every world there is.
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