Main character with full character traitsCharacter (protagonist):
Name: Steven
Characteristics:he is a developing character intelligent, popular, when near evil he gets telekinetic powers, he enjoys being around people, he takes care of himself and people around him well, he has his powers because his Dad was a protector of this planet, he has a great sense of humour. He is a developing character because he becomes more confident, more expierienced and learns about his powers.
Motivation: He wants to find and rescue his father. Also to protect the world.
story line (plot 101)
Steve is a normal 15 year old, well built, black short hair and blue eyes. His dad died.One day in his sleep he sees terrifying images in his sleep and when he wakes up he feels different. All of a sudden near death expieriences happen. He goes out with his friends to a chinese restaurant. After his meal he opens his fortune cookie and in it it sais that his life is in great danger and he has to meet on (insert lightly sinister alley Name here)... This is the distruption. Later on it turns out he has powers that he didn't know he had. This man tells him this on that alley. Next an organisation called BZR tries to capture and kill him because he has his powers. This organisation is from a different dimention which they took over. They took over that dimention and now they came for us. He has to travel with this man to that dimension to infiltrate and comfront the leader of the 'organisation' in that dimension. The leaders name is Olum.The way to destroy this organisation is to kill the leader with the blade of life. They have to go find this weapon and then kill the leader. The weapon is guarded by a griffon, which is normally good, but is controlled by the organisation by a secret potion. They used this potion to control the organisation on earth. the sword is hidden in the center of a maze hidden in a mountain. He kills the griffon and gets the sword. Rise of action. Next he has to sneak around in the castle and reach the throne room. He kills the leader and the land is brought to peace, however it turns out his father was already dead long ago. Climax. Steve becomes the protector of this planet as well as a normal school boy. His goal is to Stop people as Olum. resolution, change of ordinary world
moment in your narrative
what are the conflicts?
which other characters?
how does your character grow, or confirm a characteristic?
The conflicts In my moment are where Steven and Mike they go through a maze. man vs man, man vs environment
In this maze he has to kill a griffon to get the sword. This griffon is controlled by bzr to protect the sword. Man vs man
In this moment the characters are Steven mike.
Steven devolps his confidence when he trusts himself and attacks the griffon. He also develops his power by killing the griffon with it and collecting the sword. He proves that he can take care of people by saving mike from a falling stone by pushing him away.
Model text to be approved by me if not one of our texts this year
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description, the way the author writes it. My description post
Dialogue, the way the author writes it. My dailogue post
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